[Writing patten] 라이팅 시 중요한 틀 / 구조

질문의 종류를 파악한다. 

(discuss both view인지? / agree or disagree인지? )

 

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Introduction

딱 3줄로 쓴다. 

 

1. Background sentence ( a general statement about the topic / 예를 들면, "사회는 사람들이 모인 공동체가 이루는 것이다" )

2. Paraphrase sentence ( 질문을 다른 방식으로 같은 토픽으로 반복하기 )

3. Thesis sentence ( your opinion )

 

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Body (discussion인 상황을 가정하면)

 

Paragraph 1 : (other side)

1. Topic sentence:

 2. First argument

  3. Reason / Explanation

   4. Example:

 5. Second argument

  6. Reason / Explanation

   7. Example:

 

Paragraph 2 : (your side)

1. Topic sentence:

 2. First argument

  3. Reason / Explanation

   4. Example:

 5. Second argument

  6. Reason / Explanation

   7. Example:

 

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Conclusion

- summary/paraphrase first and second paragraph. 

- repeat your opinion

 

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예시)

Some people think that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities.(Main Issue)

Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (Instruction words)

 

0. discussion이다. 두가지 견해 둘다 설명할건데 30-other side /70-stronger, my view으로 할 것

1. topic: paying taxes

2. generalizing : paying taxes have been one of the significant responsibilities to contribue to society. 이거 어렵다..

3.  paraphrasing: While some people beileve thay paying taxes is to contribute to society big enough, others think that more responsibilities are involved for being a citizen.

4. 내의견: Both views will be discussed, and that the latter view is more convincing.

 

While some people believe that paying taxes sufficiently covers the obligations of being a citizen, others insist that there is more. Both views will be discussed, and I opine that the latter is more convincing. 

 

Some people think that paying taxes is a big enough contribution to society.  (One side body paragraph)

 

Clearly, there are several reasons why some people argue that paying taxes is a huge responsibility of working citizens.

- Topic sentence (because를 쓰지 않고도 other side에 대한 이유를 말하는 것임)

 

Firstly, it is used to fund a lot of social projects to keep a functioning community.

- 1st argument

 

In more detail, the government uses taxes to build roads, and community centers, and maintaining other public infrastructure.

- Explanation

 

Secondly, taxes are utilized to support and promote public welfare.

- 2nd argument

 

For instance, conducting charity works such as feeding programs and free medical checkups are indirect help from taxpayers to society and is, therefore, a big contribution.

- Explanation

 

If it has not had enough budget due to lack of taxes, it is unable to continue social programs. Normal people usually just keep paying taxes and that does not any problem doing that at all. As a citizen, it is totally enoughto just pay taxes for maintaining society.

- More explanation?

 

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On the other hand, it is not enough to just pay taxes.

However, I believe that a citizen's duty is beyond just paying taxes.

-Topic sentence

There are various responsibilities for citizen to maintain society well.

Firstly, as a part of a community, citizenship is crucial. It means following rules for community important as a citizen is one of the obligations of a responsible member of society, even by simply disposing of waste accordingly.

- 1st argument and explanation

Secondly, not only through financial commitment but also time and effort contribution may be necessary to develop society. For example, volunteering for charity or helping out neighbors is one of the good ways to make the world better.

- 2nd argument and explanation

Lastly, participating in elections is significantly important to influence society directly. Therefore, encouraging those various ways can be beneficial for citizens to maintain and improve society.

 

Conclusion:

In a nutshell, although paying taxes supports government programs for the public, I contend that it is not sufficient since being a citizen requires more involvement such as submitting to the rules, initiating help, and participating in elections.

 

아침마다 뛰어야겠다 혈액순환이 안된당..

 

think	believe	insist / contend	argue
responsibilities are involved for	covers the obligations	duty
enough	sufficient	<-> beyond
opine	suggest	recommend
important	crucial
commitment	assistance
disposing of waste accordingly.	쓰레기를 적절하게 상황에 맞게 버리는 것.
Clearly,	Topic sentence 전용	In a nutshell,	결론 용
Firstly, Secondly,	first argument 전용
In more detail, For instance	explanation 전용

 

예시) 

The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree？

 

0. agree or disagree이다.

1. 여기서 토픽은 traffic and transportation problem = living or moving in cities

2. generalize 시키려면:  traffic and transportation problem이 최근들어 대두되고 있다. 

3. paraphrase

4. 내 의견: 반대 (  living or moving in cities는 오히려 대중교통 문제를 가중시킨다. )

 

balanced essay (30/70) -partly / partially agree