Day 3

What do you dislike about teamwork?

Well What I dislike about teamwork. it depends on the situation, but I tend to love to work with my team. But there's also have some sideeffect like, if everyone it that team can not do the same stuff, same tasks, some people work more, and some people don't really work as much as other team member. so that kind of unbalance stuff to work. 

 

What do you learn from working in a team?

If I work within a team, I can learn quite a lot of things like how to collaborate with other people, and If we are just work alone, it can easy to work alone at the every first time because working alone would be just , I can do whatever I want. but at the end of the day, team working is way better than work alone becuase ,, let's just say that there's something that I could really sure about doing that or I had no idea about that , then other team member could know about that so It is kind of a replace my bad point or weakness. so that It can be balanced as a whole team.

 

Have you teamed up with someone else before?

yeah, i used to work as a nurse, so nursing is all about team. that is whole of teamwork. becuase to care about paitents we need a lot of staff member, who care that paitnet like that could be the doctor or chest team, gyneco-oncology team, or radio team. That kind of whole different department who we need to collaborate with. so I work as that team member, and also we are quite differenciate the job range, I mean there are some nurse just acting like give the IV shots, or change the patient's diper, or there are some nurse who notify the patient's condition to doctor. so we are focusing on caring patients as a team, and that is way better than working alone

 

Do you like teamwork?

I really like the teamwork. because if I have some difficulties of doing something, there are always someone who can replace me. let just say that I have struggled with giving IV  or like finding the IV catheter? than, if there's someone who are good at IV skill, she or he can help me to do that. So IF my paieint are in a bad condition and I am not sure, then I could just ask to another nurse so that we can discuss about the paitnet condition. SO i really like working as a team member.   

 

1. 단어 선택과 문법: 사용한 단어가 명확하지 않거나 문법적으로 틀린 부분이 있어. 예를 들어 "sideeffect" 대신 "disadvantage"나 "drawback" 같은 단어가 더 자연스러워. 또한 "unbalance stuff" 보다는 "imbalance"를 사용하는 것이 더 나아.
2. 논리적 구조: 답변의 논리 흐름이 조금 산만하게 느껴질 수 있어. 답변을 구조화해서 "주제 → 이유 설명 → 예시" 순으로 깔끔하게 말하면 더 좋을 것 같아.
3. 문장 간결화: 문장이 길어지다 보니 중복되거나 혼란스러운 부분이 생겨. 예를 들어 "working alone would be just, I can do whatever I want." 대신 "Working alone allows more flexibility, but teamwork brings greater support and collaboration."처럼 간단하게 표현해보면 더 명확할 거야.

질문마다 개선된 예시를 아래에 적어볼게:

1. What do you dislike about teamwork?

개선된 답변: "One thing I dislike about teamwork is the imbalance that can occur when some team members don’t put in as much effort as others. It can be frustrating when responsibilities aren’t evenly shared, leading to unfair workloads for some members. I also find it challenging when there’s miscommunication, which can lead to misunderstandings or mistakes, resulting in negative outcomes in the end."

2. What do you learn from working in a team?

개선된 답변: "Working in a team teaches me how to collaborate effectively and leverage the strengths of others. For example, when I face challenges, my team members often offer support or solutions, which helps me learn and grow as a different perspectives "

3. Have you teamed up with someone else before?

개선된 답변: "Yes, as a nurse, I frequently work in teams. Nursing requires collaboration with various departments like doctors, specialists, and other nursing teams. We each have specific roles, such as administering IVs or communicating patient conditions to doctors, ensuring comprehensive patient care."

4. Do you like teamwork?

개선된 답변: "I really enjoy teamwork because it allows us to support each other. For instance, if I struggle with a task like finding a vein for an IV, a colleague with stronger skills can assist me. This collaboration ensures better outcomes for patients."

 

Describe a movie you watched recently.

 

I would like to talk about Dune 2 or 3 I don't exactly remember, becuase honestly I don't like watching movies. 

I was like 1 or 2 years ago, and I watched that movie which is called Dune, with my boyfriend. the reason we watched that was becasue,, we just felt like watching any movies whatever it was at that moment and as we don;t have any interest about ganre. so we just went a movie theater and checked the movie ranking chart, and that movie was the first place. that why we watched that. 

And I honestly felt really bored. it was so boring. I just slept almost all that scene. so I couldn't remember what was about but, there were dune and tribes. And tribes were fighting each other. I couldn't understand the storyline entirely. there were too many characters and places. all that names of those were unfamillar, I heard from somewhere later that I need to watch Dune 1 first, but.. I didn't! My  fault. 

 

->

"I’d like to talk about a movie called Dune. I don’t exactly remember if it was the second or third one because, to be honest, I’m not really into movies. I watched it with my boyfriend about a year or two ago. We didn’t have any particular movie in mind; we just felt like watching something and chose the highest-ranked movie on the chart, which happened to be Dune.

To be honest, I found it quite boring. I actually fell asleep during most of the scenes, so I don’t remember much about the plot. All I recall is that there were tribes fighting each other in the desert. The storyline was confusing, and there were too many characters and unfamiliar names. Later, I heard that it’s important to watch Dune 1 first to understand the story better, but I hadn’t watched it, so I guess that was my mistake."

수정 포인트:

1. 문장 구조와 논리: 문장이 조금 산만하게 이어지던 부분을 다듬어, 논리적으로 자연스럽게 흐르도록 정리했어.
2. 문법과 표현 수정: 예를 들어, "that why we watched that" 대신 "which happened to be Dune"으로 자연스럽게 바꿨어.
3. 간결하고 명확한 표현: 영화의 지루함을 표현할 때, 반복되는 표현을 줄이고 "fell asleep" 등을 사용해 더 간결하게 표현했어.

Why do people prefer to watch movies in the cinema?

 

becuase it is way better to experience the movie fully. I mean when we go to the cinema to watch movies, we can watch that with full HD screen which is much bigger then their own computer or TV. And they have special special theater which have special speaker..so that people to allow people experience .

 

Do you think successful movies should have well-known actors or actresses in leading roles?

it doesn't necessarily need to be popular or famous actors to make a movie successful, not only for actors but also story need to be perfect. 

 

Do you think only well-known directors can create the best movies?

No, I don't think only well-known can create the best one becuase, as i said earlier, it isn't about famous directors or actors, it's about movies story, and the way that it is expressed is more important. 

The people who watch that movie focus on the story of that movie.

 

Do Korean people prefer to watch domestic movies or foreign movies?

I think Korean people prefer to watch foreign movies, because domestic movies are  not that popular or not the one people like to watch. Let's just say about the marvel movies, if there;s new one, people in korea uaully like to go to the cinema to watch that new marvel one rather than Korean one. I don't know why but I guess people in Korea tend to follow the global trand more .

 

What are the factors that make a successful movie?

The factors that make a successful movies are... I not that person who like to watch movies a lot,,, but... I would say, if the actors act really good like a real characters, or the story is very perfect, like seamless, it would be the successful movies. 

What kinds of movies do you think are successful in your country?

in my country, people usually focus on the story, becuase that is what genuinely movies.

 

1. Why do people prefer to watch movies in the cinema?

개선된 답변: "People prefer watching movies in the cinema because it provides a more immersive experience. In cinemas, we can enjoy the movie on a large, high-definition screen, which is much bigger than a home TV or any computer monitor. Some theaters even offer special sound systems, allowing people to fully experience the movie with high-quality visuals and sound.like 3D or 4D movies. 

2. Do you think successful movies should have well-known actors or actresses in leading roles?

개선된 답변: "Successful movies don’t necessarily need famous actors in the leading roles. While well-known actors can attract attention, the storyline and the way the story is presented are just as, if not more, important."For example, the film Parasite  featured only Korean actors who were not famous internationally. However, thanks to its excellent storytelling and direction, it became a huge success worldwide and even won major awards

3. Do you think only well-known directors can create the best movies?

개선된 답변: "No, I don’t think only well-known directors can create the best movies. As I mentioned earlier, it’s not just about having a famous director; it’s about how the story is told and how it engages the audience. The story and its execution are what matter most." not necessarily their fame.

4. Do Korean people prefer to watch domestic movies or foreign movies?

개선된 답변: "I think many Korean people prefer watching foreign movies, as they often receive more attention than domestic ones. For example, when a new Marvel movie is released, people in Korea usually go to the cinema to watch it instead of a Korean film. It seems that people here tend to follow global trends."

5. What are the factors that make a successful movie?

개선된 답변: "The factors that make a successful movie include a strong storyline and realistic acting. Even though I’m not a big movie fan, I believe a movie becomes successful when the characters feel real, and the story flows seamlessly."

6. What kinds of movies do you think are successful in your country?

개선된 답변: "In my country, people tend to focus on the storyline. If the story is engaging and feels genuine, the movie is likely to be successful."

수정 포인트:

1. 문법과 표현: 문법적인 오류와 어색한 표현을 수정해, 자연스럽고 정확하게 답변이 이어지도록 했어.
2. 구체적인 설명: 예를 들어, "the factors that make a successful movie"라는 질문에 좀 더 구체적이고 명확한 답을 제시하도록 수정했어.
3. 반복적인 표현 제거: 같은 단어나 표현이 반복되는 부분을 줄이고, 더 다양한 단어를 사용하여 답변의 풍부함을 더했어.