Day 1

Use synonyms

1. I'm fond of ~something

  I'm fond of trying new cafes every we

  I'm into ~something

 

 

2. Really

 Absolutely

completely

 

3. I'm very excited

I'm absolutely thrilled.

 

4. elaborate

"이 계획은 훌륭해 보이는데, 조금 더 elaborate해서 상세한 일정과 목표를 만들어야 할 것 같아요."

"This plan looks great, but I think we need to elaborate on it a bit more to create a detailed schedule and goals."

 

1. I would say it is..Room

2. The reason what is that..I can completely relex

3. For example.. After I finish my whole day and get back to home, I

 

Take a lot of photos, sky.

 

I really love watching sunset, taking photos of it. 

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Questions:

What is your favoriate place and why?

 

Recorded answer:

Well, My favoriate place, Ahhhh, I would say my room. The reason why I love that place, is just because .. there's , the place that I can relex the most, and. for example, when I finish working, after I've finished my working, I just go back to my home right away, and just go to my room. ahh that was just because I ahh can relex there, I can completely feel out of my stress.

 

챗지피티:

One of my favourite places is my room. The reason I love it so much is because it's the place where I can relax the most. I've decorated it with my favorite bed and cozy blankets, which make it feel even more comfortable.  For instance, after a long day at work, I go straight home and head to my room. There, I can completely unwind and forget all the stress of the day."

 

주요 수정 사항:

1. "My favoriate place, Ahhhh, I would say my room."
   • 수정: "My favorite place is definitely my room."
   • 설명: "Ahhhh, I would say"는 말이 조금 어색해 보일 수 있어요. 더 자연스러운 표현으로 "My favorite place is definitely my room."처럼 확신을 더해주는 말로 바꿔보았어요.
2. "The reason why I love that place, is just because"
   • 수정: "The reason I love it so much is because"
   • 설명: "The reason why"와 "just because"는 불필요하게 중복된 표현이에요. 더 간결하게 "The reason I love it so much is because"라고 수정했어요.
3. "There's, the place that I can relex the most"
   • 수정: "it's the place where I can relax the most."
   • 설명: "There’s"는 조금 모호하게 들릴 수 있어 "it's the place where"처럼 문장 구조를 명확하게 바꿨어요.
4. "when I finish working, after I've finished my working"
   • 수정: "after a long day at work"
   • 설명: "finish working"과 "after I’ve finished my working"은 의미가 반복되므로 자연스럽게 "after a long day at work"로 간결하게 정리했어요.
5. "ahh that was just because I ahh can relex there"
   • 수정: "There, I can completely unwind and forget all the stress of the day."
   • 설명: 같은 이유를 반복하는 대신 더 구체적으로 "completely unwind"와 "forget all the stress"로 바꾸어 내용이 명확하게 전달되도록 했어요.

 

 

 

Questions:

Would you take photos when you see a good view?

 

Recorded answers:

I would take photos a lot when I see a good view absolutely, well I really like taking photos and especially when I see a good view, especially sky, I really like to just not only just watching it, but also wanna just catch it. and I also wanna memorize and remind at some point, so I love taking photos of it as well. 

 

수정된 답변:

"I would definitely take a lot of photos when I see a good view. I really enjoy photography, especially when it comes to beautiful scenery, like the sky. I don't just want to admire it; I want to capture it and have something to look back on later. For example, if you look at my phone gallery, about 70% of the photos are of the sky—sunsets, clear skies, and beautiful clouds. That's why I love taking photos of great views."

주요 수정 사항:

1. "I would take photos a lot when I see a good view absolutely"
   • 수정: "I would definitely take a lot of photos when I see a good view."
   • 설명: "take photos a lot"보다는 "take a lot of photos"가 더 자연스러워요. 또한 "absolutely"는 문장 끝보다는 "definitely"로 바꾸어 문장 초반에 두는 것이 더 매끄럽습니다.
2. "well I really like taking photos and especially when I see a good view, especially sky"
   • 수정: "I really enjoy photography, especially when it comes to beautiful scenery, like the sky."
   • 설명: "taking photos" 대신 "photography"를 사용하면 좀 더 세련된 표현이 되고, "especially"를 반복하지 않도록 구조를 간결하게 수정했어요.
3. "I really like to just not only just watching it, but also wanna just catch it."
   • 수정: "I don't just want to admire it; I want to capture it."
   • 설명: "just"가 여러 번 반복되어 문장이 어색해지므로 "admire"와 "capture" 같은 동사를 사용해 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 수정했어요.
4. "and I also wanna memorize and remind at some point"
   • 수정: "I want to have something to look back on later."
   • 설명: "memorize"와 "remind"는 여기서 자연스럽지 않아서, "look back on"이라는 표현을 사용해 과거를 회상할 수 있다는 의미로 바꿨어요.

 

 

 

 

Question:

Have you seen an unforgettable and beautiful view or scenery?

Yes, 

One of the most unforgettable views I’ve ever experienced was stunning night view in Budapest. Standing by the Danube River, the way the city’s landmarks were illuminated was absolutely breathtaking.

 

The Parliament building, with its glowing lights reflected on the water, looked almost magical. Across the river, the Buda Castle and Fisherman’s Bastion were beautifully lit up, creating a perfect contrast with the dark sky.

The whole scene felt like a painting come to life, and I was in awe of how the city transformed at night.

 

It’s a memory that really left an impression on me, and I would love to experience it again.

 

 

 

Question:

What is the view like around the place where you live?

->around place where I live? um there are quite crowded, I would say. so there's a lot of apartment building, and um subway stations, so It is very crowded and a lot of people. 

수정된 답변:

"Around the place where I live, it’s quite crowded. There are a lot of apartment buildings and subway stations, so it's usually busy with a lot of people. I couldn't say it is a good view, but it could be an popular urban view. I live near a university, so there are plenty of great restaurants and pubs in the area. It’s really convenient because I have so many options for dining out, and there are always new places to explore. Whether you're looking for a casual meal or a fun night out, there’s always something to enjoy nearby."

 

 

 

Questions:

Describe a person who likes to read a lot

 

 

Recorded answers:

Well, I would say my older sister, because she is just the person who love reading a lot her whole life, so when she was a child, she just liked to go to the library and read a lot of book as much as possible becuase she was, She even won some championships of reading in her school co she has some proud of herself that she read a lot so .. I think because of that, she was reading alot and alot. I don't really know why she like that reading but I think she has a lot of the power to imagine so that she can 100% enjoy what to read and just a everything with her books. so she love that a lot because of her imagination and also she love novel, specifically. and she also like harrypotter. and like that kind of sci-fi books. that she can really imagine herself in the middle of that novel book. That was really interesting because I am the person who don't really like reading. I feel like it was just interesting while we were growing in the same family because we were so different. 

 

수정된 답변:

"Well, I would say my older sister, because she has loved reading her whole life.

When she was a child, she used to go to the library and read as many books as she could. She even won some reading competitions at school, so she felt proud of herself for reading so much.

That’s why I think she developed a habit of reading a lot. I’m not exactly sure why she enjoys reading so much, but I believe it's because she has a vivid imagination.

This allows her to fully immerse herself in the stories. She especially loves novels, particularly fantasy and sci-fi, like the Harry Potter series. She enjoys imagining herself in the middle of those fictional worlds.

I find it really interesting because I’m not much of a reader myself, and it's funny how we grew up in the same family but turned out so different."