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The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ Balanced essay (30-70) (partly, partially) traffic and transportation problem.1. 몇몇의 사람들은 도시에 살면 도시와 시골간 이동을 안해도 되니까 트래픽 문제를 해결할 수 있다고 생각한다.-먼저, 도시와 시골간 이동이 트래픽 문제를 야기한다. 예시로, 국가 공휴일이나 긴 홀리데이때 항상 항공편과 버스 등의 예약이 꽉 찬다. 고..

질문의 종류를 파악한다. (discuss both view인지? / agree or disagree인지? )  Introduction딱 3줄로 쓴다.  1. Background sentence ( a general statement about the topic / 예를 들면, "사회는 사람들이 모인 공동체가 이루는 것이다" )2. Paraphrase sentence ( 질문을 다른 방식으로 같은 토픽으로 반복하기 )3. Thesis sentence ( your opinion )  Body (discussion인 상황을 가정하면) Paragraph 1 : (other side)1. Topic sentence: 2. First argument  3. Reason / Explanation   4. Exampl..

* Cherish time I spendI always cherish the time I spend with my family during the holidays.나는 항상 휴일에 가족들과 함께 보내는 시간을 소중히 여긴다. * She was splited halfThe magician put her in a box and appeared to split her in half마술사가 그녀를 상자에 넣고 반으로 가르는 것처럼 보였다."appeared to"를 넣으면 마술이라는 맥락을 강조해, 실제로 반으로 나뉘었다는 오해를 줄일 수 있어요. *I thought she was going to die Watching the magic trick, I thought she was going to die, but..

Common Types of Discourse Markers and linking phrases:Addition (to add more information)Examples: furthermore, besides, in addition, Another thing that comes to mind, also, besides, additionally, another good example of this is, another reason for this, and one more thing, another worth mentioning is, moreoverExample sentence: I enjoy reading books. Furthermore, I love discussing them with frien..

1. Describe a small shop where you often buy things. You should say:Where it isWhen you usually go there to buy thingsWhat you often buy thereAnd explain how you feel about it.  I’d like to talk about a grocery store in my neighborhood called Onurimart. I often go there to buy groceries, snacks, or other daily essentials. The main reason I go there is that it’s the closest shop to my home. Also,..

She's throwing away: 버리고 있다Shovel: 삽질하다The man is shoveling snow from a walkway. 남자가 삽으로 보도의 눈을 치우고 있다.The man is running through the snow. 남자가 눈 속을 달리고 있다.Potted plant: 화분에 심은 식물be suspended from: ~에 매달려 있다. Potted plants have been suspended from a ceiling. 화분에 심은 식물이 천장에 매달려있다. entryway: 입구의 통로light fixture: 조명기구A light fixture has been left on the ground. 조명 기구가 바닥에 놓여 있다. Yet의 사용법: 이미, 벌써, 아..

[Wrong answer](×) I couldn't watch the details of that song.☞ watch라는 표현이 어색함. see the details이 더 적절함.  [Revised answer]I couldn't see the details of that song.I couldn't find information on that song.  [Wrong answer](×) I prefer watching movie.☞ movie 말고 movies가 정확함. movie should be plural when referring to watching films in general.[Revised answer]I prefer watching movies to reading books. [Wr..

당연하다고 생각해 "I assume it's natural"I assume it's natural for people to feel nervous before an interview.I think communication skills are something that naturally comes with being human. introduce myselfI’m currently a job seeker with a strong commitment to becoming a dedicated nurse.Previously, I worked as a research nurse focused on clinical trials for cancer patients. It was a challenging role, ..