[Writing task 2] Government and social issue topic

Common ideas

1. government related topics

-public healthcare - ensuring people's health, providing medical care to the public

-urban issues - relocating citizens in major cities to regional towns, solving urban issues

-public services - providing education [ spending more money on certain subjects than others ], providing public services, building infrastructure

-financial support - helping developing nations with financial support, giving financial assistance to people in need, providing financial support to a certain sector.

 

* healthcare: 전반적인 의료 체계, 의료 산업

* health care: 건강 치료 (행위)

정부의 사업 얘기할 때는 전반적인 의료 체계, 의료 산업을 의미하므로, healthcare 라고 붙여서 씀.  Public healthcare: 공중보건

* people in need: 도움을 필요로 하는 사람

 

ex) Most world's urgent problems are caused by overpopulation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

General + Thesis

It is believed that overpopulation affects most of the emergency situations around the world, while others insist that other factors make serious issues all over the world.

I firmly disagree with this view as I believe that there are other variaty of issue that negative influence on overpopulation. 

 

Nowadays, the world is suffering from various issues and those problems are becoming more and more severe. It is believed that the most pressing problems in the world stem from overpopulation.  ~에서 유래하다

Topic 1 agree - overpopulation has caused many problems that the world is facing. 

Main1 As population grows, environmental issues are worsening 

Supporting1

Topic 2 

Main 2 The amount of natural resources is decreasing in the world.

Supporting 2

 

Topic 1 disagree - not all major global problems are caused by overpopulation.

Main1 The development of technology increases the rate of unemployment

Supporting1

Topic 2 

Main 2 There are natural climatic occurrences and natural disasters happening in the world.

Supporting 2

In conclusion, although~

I suggest~

 

Some people think government should provide more money on faster means of public transport, while others think that they should pay attention to more important priorities such as spending money on the environment. Discuss.

 

Some people argue that the government should allocate more funds to faster public transportation. However, others insist that they should prioritize environmental spending. Both views will be discussed, and I opine that the latter view is more convincing.

 

On one hand, spending more money on faster public transportation may be the solution for traffic congestion, which is the one of the urban issues. Since people tend to drive their own vehicle to get the place earlier, faster public transport might enable them to prefer public transportation then their private vehicle, which make the amount of public transportation used increases. In addition, faster transportation can help reduce overpopulation. Employees sometimes need to live closer to their work due to long commute times. With the development of faster transport options, they can live further away, which can help alleviate urban overpopulation.

 

On the other hand, it is way better for government to spend money on other vital issues like the environment, rather than faster transports. First of all, since climate change is the issue that people recently face and actually feel, eco-friendly policies and their introductions are needed as a priority, such as, spending budgets for reducing the mass production wastes, decreasing amount of carbon emissions or water pollutions. Secondly, government have to more invest providing public services, such as extending public education period, health insurances and welfare system, because those are the direct factors that make people’s life better.

 

In conclusion, I believe that spending more money on the environment rather than on faster means of public transport is crucial for the next generation in this planet by protecting the earth from the reckless development.

 

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