[Writing task1] Map
2개 이상의 지도들의 차이점을 비교하는 유형
방향 표현, 전치사 사용 필수
지도에 나온 모든 시설들은 사람에 의해 만들어졌으므로 수동태로 문장 구성 (Be+과거분사)
평면도 (layout-내부) 또는 지도(Map of a place-외부) 출제
1)Describing locations
North/South/East/West - 명사로 쓰임
Northern side / Southern side / Eastern side / Western side - 형용사로 쓰임.
North-east / North-west / South-east / South-west
A to the (north/south/east/west) of B : A는 B의 ~쪽에 있다. (상대적)
In the (north/south/east/west) : ~쪽에 (절대적.)
On the (northern/southern/eastern/western) side of: 의 ~방향에 (상대적)
Left-hand / Right-hand: west/east
A B C
B is located to the east of A
B is in the center.
B is on the eastern side of A
2)Prepositions
on the second floor: 딱 붙어있는 것. 특정 지형 위에 올라가 있는 상태일떄 (on the river bank)
next to = by = beside ~ 옆에
near = nearby = adjoining ~의 근처에
from A to B: A와 B 사이의 모든 면적을 통틀어 말함.
between A to B:A와 B 사이에 어떤 물건이나 건물이 있다면. 그것을 지칭하기 위해 쓰임.
across from = opposite to = in front of ~의 맞은 편에.
over ~을 넘어서 (다리 말할 떄)
along = alongside ~을 따라서 (길,해변,강 등)
The trees to the north of the river were cut down and a new office block was built.
그 나무들은, 강의 북쪽에 있는, 잘려지고 새로운 사무실블럭이 지어졌다.
A railway was constructed to the east of the housing estate with the introduction of a new train station.
housing estate: 주택단지 =housing complex
한 철길이 건설되었다. 주택단지의 동쪽에, 새 기차역의 도입과 함께,
The forest to the west of the park was cut down and a new housing complex was contructed.
그 숲은, 공원의 서쪽에 있는, 잘렸다, 그리고 새로운 주택단지가 지어졌다.
The industrial area to the south-west of the station was expanded.
산업단지는, 기차역의 남서쪽에 있는, 확장되었다.
expand는 사이즈가 커지는 거고 extend는 길이가 lengthy~~
Houses were contructed next to the primary school.
주택들은 건설되었다, 초등학교 옆에
The forest near the river was cut down.
A new railway running from north to south was built.
The footpath by the river was expanded
Parking facilities were added in the city center.
The school across from the park was extended and new sports facilities were built.
공원 건너편에 있는 학교가 높아지고 새로운 체육 시설이 건설되었다.
3) Vocabulary to describe changes
확장: expand/ expansion-size
extend/extension-length
enlarge/enlargement - text, photograph 사진을 확대해서 보는건데...
제거: remove/removal
demolish/demolition - building을 철거하다
cut down = log -trees를 자를때
reduce/reduction -number가 decrease되었을 때
추가:
contruct/construction | build/building | introduce/introduction | establish/establishment | develop/development 다 건설하다
plant - tree를 심다
변화: change/change into~/to~
convert/conversion into~
redevelop/redevelopment into~
replace/replacement by~ : 이건 능동태로도 바꿀 수 있음.
A was replaced by B -> B replace A
refurbish/refurbishment -> 재단장하다, 니까 layout 말할 때 리모델링 하는 것.
변화가 없을 때 (능동태만 가능)
stand as it did / stand as it used to
stand where it was once located
remain at the same site
[Question] The two maps show some changes in Paradise lsland in the past and the present.
1. 방향 정하기 : 하나는 디테일 1, 하나는 디테일 2가 될 것임
2. 변화가 보여지는 부분/ 변화가 없는 부분 나누기
3. introduction / Overview / detail 1 / detail 2
4. Overview 쓸때는 아래와 같은 방향으로 쓸 것!
완전 두 지도가 바뀌었다면 ~의 목적이 바뀌었다.
e.g. Overall, it is clearly seen that the use of the island has altered from research to tourism.
혹은 별로 많이 안바뀌었다면 ~이 가장 눈에 띄는 변화이다.
e.g. Overall, the most notable changes were the introduction of ~~.
The given maps illutrate how Paradise Island has changed from the past to the present.
The given maps depict how Paradise Island has changed from the past to the present.
Overall, the most notable change is the introduction of new facilities including the open restaurant and the hotel complex.
As the masp present, the beach in the west of the island has been permitted swimming and the pier to the south of the beach has been expanded in size along with the change in the boat into the cruise ship. Next to the pier, there was a scientific research station in the past, which turned into the hotel complex with the swimming pool to the north of it. (pier)
Turning to the open restaurant, it has been constructed in the center of the island with the barbecue area next to it. The cycle paths have been built around the island, and the natural spring stays where it used to be in the east of the island. The cafe has been introduced beside the natural spring, and the scenic lookout has been extablished in the north-east corner of the island.
*Assignment
The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The given maps depict how Ryemouth village has developed from 1995 to the present.
Overall, the most notable change is the conversion of the farmland and forest park into the golf and tennis facilities.
As the maps present, one of the road has been extended to the north-west of the maps. Four more houses has been built alongside the roads. On the eastern side of the housing estate, farmland and forest park have been converted into golf fleids and tennis courts so far. The hotel to the south of the tennis courts stand as it used to, while the carpark next to the hotel has been established in the present day.
Opposite to the hotel, shops in 1995 has been changed into restaurants thesedays. In front of them, recent apartment replace the fish market of the past. The cafe to the east of apartments remains at the same place from the past to the present. In the southmost part of the maps, fishing port has been demolished in present.
3. shops and fish market -> restaurants and apartments, fishing port disappeared,
4. hotel stays, carpark new!, cafe stays!
The given maps depict how Ryemouth village has developed from 1995 to the present.
Overall, the most notable change is the conversion of the farmland and forest park into the golf and tennis facilities.
As the maps present, one of the roads has been extended to the north-west of the maps. Four more houses have been built alongside the roads. On the eastern side of the housing estate, farmland and forest park have been converted into golf fleids and tennis courts so far. The hotel to the south of the tennis courts stands as it used to, while the carpark next to the hotel has been established in the present day.
Opposite to the hotel, shops in 1995 has been changed into restaurants these days. In front of them, recent apartment replaces the fish market of the past. The cafe to the east of apartments remains at the same place from the past to the present. In the southmost part of the maps, fishing port has been demolished in present.
Total : 169 words
첨삭된 버전
The given maps depict how Ryemouth village has developed from 1995 to the present.
Overall, the most notable change is has been the conversion of the farmland and forest park into the golf and tennis facilities.
As the maps present, one of the roads in the housing has been extended to the north-west of the maps. Houses have been built alongside the roads. On the eastern side of the housing estate, farmland and forest park have been converted into golf fleids and tennis courts so far. The hotel to the south of the tennis courts stands as it used to, while the carpark next to the hotel has been established in the present day.
Opposite to the hotel, shops in 1995 has been changed into replaced by restaurants these days. In front of them, apartment have replaced the fish market. The cafe to the east of apartments remains at the same place from the past to the present. In the southmost part of the maps, fishing port has been demolished in present.
과거에 어땠고, 현재에 어땟고를 전혀 신경쓰면 안됨. 왜냐면, 지도는 지도니까
같은 건물, 다른 용도라면 changed into 말고, replace by로 사용하기