[Writing task 1] Pie chart
원형 그래프 위에 수치가 백분율로 주어져 있고, 하나만 나오지 않고 2개 이상씩 나옴.
기간이 있는 경우에는 카테고리별로 변화 분석이 필요함.
기간이 없는 경우에는 카테고리별로 비교함.
*비율을 차지하다: account for, occupy, stand at, take up, constitute, comprise
*분수/배수 표현
double, twofold: 2배
triple, threefold: 3배
quadruple, fourfold: 4배
quintuple, fivefold: 5배
~배: ~times
as 배수표현(부사) as much - ~배 만큼 / as twice as much, as three times as much
e.g. The figure for A doubled over 5 years.
=The figure for A showed a twofold increase for 5 years.
=The figure for A increased by 2 times
a half (1/2)
a third (1/3)
a quarter (1/4)
a fifth (1/5)
a tenth (1/10)
e.g. The figure for A was a half that of B.
The figure for A accounted for a third.
The figure for A decreased by third.
*비교
A compared to B
=> The figure for A was a third compared to B.
A + be동사 + 배수/분수표현/비교급 + that of B
The figure for A was a double that of B.
The figure for A was higher by two times than that of B.
The pie charts below show the highest level of education achieved by people over age 21 in two different countries.
The given charts indicate how the proportion of education level achieved by people older than 21 years old varies in two different nations.
-> 시간적 변화가 있었다면, how 명사구 changes
The given charts indicate the proportion of education level achieved by people older then 21 years old in two different nations.
Detail나누기 - 각 카테고리(교육수준)의 수치를 분석 -> 디테일 2개로 구성.
비교 분석하는 유형이므로 단순히 country A/B로만 구분하면 안돼
e.g. in terms of primary education, 15% of people in country A have attended primary school while only 5% of adults have received tht same levelled education.
문단 구성
1. introduction: paraphrase the question.
The given charts indicate how the proportion of education level achieved by people older than 21 years old varies in two different nations.
2. Overview: key features on the chart->여기서 절대 트렌드 언급하지 말 것. 주어진 자료가 연속적이지 않기 때문.
Overall, it is clearly seen that in both countries, most people have graduated secondary schools, while only a mere proportion of people have not attened schools.
3. Detail 1
In detail, in terms of primary education, 15% of people in country A have attended primary school, while onle 5% of adults have received the same levelled education in country B. In country A, about a half of the whole proportion has been taken up by secondary education, which is the largest proportion, and 35% of people have received secondary education in country B.
4. Detail 2
Turning to the figure for other categories, a quarter of the people in the Country B got education there, which is fivefold of the proportion of Country A. Both of two country, 5% of the total adult population have graduated from universities in country B, which is fivefold the figure for country A. Regarding of Vocational/ technology school and no schooling, the proportion in both countries are the same at 30% and 5%, respectively.
The given charts compare how further education adults have received in two different countries: country A and B.
Overall, in both countries, most people have received education up to secondary level, while only a mere proportion of people have not attended schools.
In detail, in terms of primary education, 15% of people in country A have attended primary school while only 5% of adults have received the same levelled education in country B. In country A, about a half of the whole proportion has been taken up by secondary education, which is the largest proportion, and 35% of people have received secondary education in country B.
As for vocational education, 30% of adults have attended this type of school in both country A and B each. The percentage of people attended university accounts for 5% in country A whereas 25% of adults have received higher education. The percentages of no schooling in both countries comprise the same proportion at 5%, respectively.
The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period.
The given charts indicate how the proportion of tourism to two nations changed for a half of the centry.
=The given charts compare the changes in the percentages of Asian, USA, European and British tourists to Australia and Germany between 1960 and 2010. (패러프레이징 할때도, 표에 있는 카테고리들은 다 언급해줘야지. )
Overall, the percentage of Europian tourists in Australia experienced a significant decrease, while that in Germany experienced a slight fall over the given period.
In detail, about a half of the people who traveled to Australia were from Europe in 1960, after which,
=In detail, the percentages of tourism from Asia started at only a tenth in both countries in 1960, and then the figures witness an increase to 63% and 25% in Australia and Germany, respectively. In contrast, the proportions of British tourists in Australia and Germany accounted for 25% and 20%, respectively in 1960, and it decreased to a fifth in Australia and by 14% in Germany during the given period.
Turning to the figure for European tourists, around a half of tourism from Europe in Australia in 1960 decreased to a tenth over the 5 decades, while the proportion of the German tourism from Europe accounted for 45% and 40% in 1960 and 2010, respectively. In terms of the percentages of USA tourists, the figure for them to Australia dropped slightly from 12% to 7% while it increased slightly by 4% in Germany from 1960 and 2010.
The given charts indicate the proportion of average household expenses in two countries, Japan and Malaysia, in 2010.
Overall, it is clearly seen that Japanese people spent the largest proportion of their household budget for food, while Malaysian spent the most for housing over the given period.
In detail, the percentage of Japanese household spending for food was 24%, the largest proportions among the given categories, while in Malaysia, it was 27%. In contrast, Malaysian spent the largest share of their expenses on housing, whereas the proportion of Japanese people spent on their housing occupied 21% at that time.
Turning to health care, both countries paid their household budget the least on this category, with 6% and 3% of the proportion in Japan and Malaysia, respectively. Considering the share of transport, the figure for Japanese household spending was double that of Malaysian, accounting for 20% of the total average household expenditure in Japan and 10% in Malaysia in 2010.
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