[Writing task 2] 남녀공학
Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit from attending mixed schools. Discuss.
While some people assume that separating genders in school is more educational, others think that mixing genders is more beneficial for students in school. Both views will be discussed, and I opine that the latter view is more convincing.
On the one hand, it is necessary to divide gender for educating in each school. First of all, if students can study with their own gender in class, they would be fully understood one another and able to build strong fellowship. In school, as a growing human being, it is really important to share their personal but common changes since they may experience the various development that they have not ever done.
Secondly, for teachers, separate gender in school is much easier to manage and operate their education. Boys and girls are significantly different for their prospective, characteristics, communication methods and physical conditions, therefore, their education strategy has to be different. It might be hard to adjust their teaching way for two opposite students each.
On the other hand, I insist that it is better to attend in mixed schools. Firstly, gender is not necessary factor to influence academic performances and social skills in school. Diversity is one of the things students need to learn, so mixed schools are better for education. In addition, student should get information on the opposite as men and women always co-exist in the world. Even though they have a number of differences, the only way they can get along on this planet is to acknowledge each other. That is what students learn once they get to school.
To conclude, although it seems difficult for students of all gender to study in the same school, the mixed-gender class has positive influences on their education. Thus, the government should get the separated school together in order to pursue further improvement in society.
Total: 310words
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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit from attending mixed schools. Discuss.
While some people assume that separating genders in school is more educational, others think that mixing genders is more beneficial for students in school. Both views will be discussed, and I opine that the latter view is more convincing.
On the one hand, it is necessary to divide gender for educating education in school. First of all, if students can study with only their one gender in class, they will better understand one another and be able to build strong fellowship. In school, as growing individuals, it is crucial to share not only their personal, but common changes since they may experience the various developments that they have not ever done been through before. Secondly, for teachers, separating students by gender in school make the management and the educational operation much easier. Boys and girls are significantly different for in terms of their prospective, characteristics, communication approaches and physical conditions, and therefore, teachers may struggle to use the same teaching methods for both genders due to their distinct different learning styles. It can be challenging to adopt their educational strategies for both of them at the same time.
-> 선생님이 편한 것이지 학생들에게는 관련이 없다.
On the other hand, I insist that it is better to attend in mixed schools. Firstly, gender is not an important factor that influences academic performances and social skills in school. Rather, diversity is one of the good educational materials students need to learn and explore, so gender mixed schools are way better for education. In addition, students should get receive information on the opposite as men and women always co-exist in the world. Even though they have a number of differences, the only way they can get along on this planet for the last of their life is to acknowledge and admit each other, which leads to they need to collaborate and cooperate to make the better society. That is what students should learn about each other once they get to in school.
To conclude, although it seems difficult for students of all gender to study in the same school(이런 이야기 없음), it is commonly believe that seperating gender is better in school, the mixed-gender class has positive influences on their education. Thus, the government should get the separated school together in order to start operating mixed schools to pursue further societal improvement.
Total: 349words