paraphrasing 너무 어려워요
It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents.
Do you agree of disagree?
Students in university is better to live independently than live with their family at home.
It's more suitable for student to live independently.
Students can become more independent both financially and mentally.
earn a living on their own -> They are able to earn a living on their own.
live separately
make a living by themselves 자력으로 생계를 꾸리다.
adapt to a new environment by themselves
self-reliance 자기 의존 many students can have self-reliance
fend for themselves 스스로 자기를 건사하다. 앞가림하다.
= stand on their own feet.
Tip. 문장 유형을 바꾼다,
:능동-수동, 수동-능동, 긍정문-부정문, 부정문-긍정문( 주어에 유의 )
Advertisements may give people some information.
->passive-> people may be given some information by advertisements( commercials. )
Major cities usually have many more job opportunities than small towns.
-> nagative -> Small-sized towns have far fewer job opportunities than big cities.
Most information about culture and history can be found on the internet.
->people can find most cultural and historical information online
Tip2. 동의어 및 유의어 사용 ㅠㅠ
:beneficial - helpful, advantageous
handle - deal with, manage, control, tackle
postpone - put off, push back, delay
Children should register for a sport class as a compulsory course for health reasons.
-> Young students should enroll in sport classes as a required subject for their physical fitness.
Tips 3. 문장구조를 전환
: phrase -> clause / simple -> compound, complex sentence
- there be 활용하기!
- it is.... that/who... 활용하기!
Classical music is as popular as rock music with our customers.
-> Our customers like classical music. However, rock music is also gaining in popularity.
Although we are going through the recession, the government should invest the public education.
-> Despite the economic downturn, the government should reinforce the state education.
Museums are not needed anymore
-> there is no need to go museums anymore
Some people think that children should be punished if they commit a crime. Other people believe that their parents are the ones that should be punished.
-> Some people argue that there should be certain types of punishment for children who break the law, while others feel that it is parents who should received the punishment.
Tip 4. 문장에 쓰인 품사 변환
명사-동사, 형용사 등
Their price is reasonable, so the products are competitive.
-> The price of their products can attract customers.
Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore.
People do not need museums anymore because of the accessibility for most cultural and historical information about online
believe: argue, suggest, promote
unpaid community service = volunteer work, social welfare activities
compulsory = obligatory, mandatory
Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
The world is facing one of the most important situation with global warming.
It is without doubt that global warming is now a global crisis.
Cultures around the world are becoming more similar than ever before.
Nowadays, there has been increasing cultural similarity all over the world.