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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features

and make comparisons where relevant.

 

1. The graph illustrates the production levels of three main types of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000, namely natural gas, petroleum, and coal.

 

2. Initially, the production of natural gas remained stable (=stay constant) between 1981 and 1990, after which it saw a gradual increase over the next decade.

 

3. In contrast, petroleum production experienced significant fluctuations throughout the period. It rose sharply from 1981 to 1984, stabilized over the following two years, and then declined substantially until 1990. Following this decline, there wa s a notable increase, and the production level plateaued from 1996 to 2000.

 

4. Meanwhile, coal production saw a marked decrease of more than 40 units from 1983 to 1984, followed by a slight increase over the next two years. However, it experienced a consistent downward trend until the end of the period.

 

5. Overall, by the year 2000, coal production was the lowest among the three main fuels in the UK.

 

6. In summary, the graph highlights the dynamic changes in fuel production in the UK from 1981 to 2000, showcasing the rise of natural gas and the decline of coal, with petroleum maintaining a fluctuating yet prominent role in the energy sector.

 

 

문장에서 "saw"의 의미는 "경험하다" 또는 "겪다"를 의미합니다. "Coal production saw a marked decrease of more than 40 units from 1983 to 1984"라는 문장은 "1983년에서 1984년 사이에 석탄 생산량이 40단위 이상 크게 감소했다"라는 의미입니다. 여기서 "saw"는 특정 기간 동안 어떤 변화나 사건이 발생했음을 나타내는 데 사용됩니다.

예시

  • "The company saw a significant increase in sales last year." (그 회사는 작년에 판매량이 크게 증가했다.)
  • "The city saw a dramatic rise in population over the past decade." (그 도시는 지난 10년 동안 인구가 급격히 증가했다.)

개선된 문장 예시:

  • "Coal production experienced a marked decrease of more than 40 units from 1983 to 1984."
  • "Coal production witnessed a marked decrease of more than 40 units from 1983 to 1984."

이러한 동사들은 특정 기간 동안 일어난 변화를 설명할 때 자주 사용됩니다. "Saw"는 이와 같은 맥락에서 일어난 사건이나 변화를 전달하는 데 매우 적절한 표현입니다.